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Aaron DeMay

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  • 平均评分
    4.96 / 5
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    5星
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  • 用户评价
    68
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    369
  • 服务按时率
    88%

简介

I've helped many students stand out in their applications to the most competitive schools, including Yale, Columbia and UPenn. Since graduating at the top of my class from Boston University, with a degree in English, I've worked hard to develop my skills as a writer, editor and educator. Traveling extensively and learning foreign languages have familiarized me with the difficulties of communicating across borders –– and motivated my search for the perfect expression. I'm confident that, together, we can make your application represent you in the way you deserve.

我是Aaron,  我非常乐意和你一起合作, 我很确定你的技能, 经历以及动力是非常独特并且让人印象深刻的, 这些内容值得你清晰的表述出来。 能帮助你我感到非常激动并且我会竭尽全力你的申请文书看起来既流畅又能体现你的专业素养。

自我介绍

Since graduating from Boston University with highest honors, I've committed myself to my native language. I've taught English to high school and university students, and I've worked on my own English as a writer. My teaching in South Korea and Japan has acquainted me with the challenges that bright, ambitious students face while preparing to study abroad in an English-speaking country. Through editing essays and meeting with students one-on-one to discuss their college applications, I have gained a wealth of insight into various aspects of this process. Meanwhile, I have worked on becoming a better student myself –– one who is always on the lookout for a better expression or a more appropriate word. This year, I have started a graduate degree in English Literature to pursue my own academic enthusiasm further; and professionally, I have committed myself to editing and advising opportunities, in which I can draw most fully on my skills and experience. 

自从从波士顿大学以荣誉学士学位毕业之后,我就把自己完全投身于推动英语发展的事业中。除了在高中和大学的英语教学经历,我还成为了一名作家。我在韩国和日本的教学经历让我深刻地了解这些有才智的学生在申请过程中将面对非常多的挑战。 和他们一对一进行申请材料修改的过程中, 这个过程中我积累了非常多的经验。 与此同时我也在努力成为一个更棒的英文专业学生, 专注于每一个字句的选择。 今年 我继续了我的英文文学硕士学习。我决定投身于编辑和咨询事业, 最大化发挥我的能力和经验。

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教育经历

教育

Boston University

Bachelor English
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经历

Private Instructor

Manhattan Review
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I help students prepare for exams such as the GRE, GMAT and SAT. Much of this preparation involves teaching the high-level language skills necessary for fixing and crafting complex sentences. 

English Professor

Meijo University
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I taught an English conversation course to university students, many of whom were preparing to study abroad in a western country. This gave me the opportunity to help them with their various applications, and acquainted me with the challenges involved in expressing one's experiences and motivations clearly and effectively in another language. 

English Teacher

Brand New Language Academy
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At this academy, I taught TOEFL preparation courses. Through my essay assignments I gained a wealth of insights into the communicative obstacles that come up when bright students try to capture important thoughts, ideas, memories and motivations in a foreign language. My courses here sharpened my eye for editing and gave me plenty of opportunities to work one-on-one with students, offering them personalized suggestions and reworking their writings into polished, professional statements. 

Private SAT Tutor

Academic Approach
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I assisted high schools students with SAT preparation and developed a better understanding of the academic standards and expectations on the part of top US universities. 

获奖 & 荣誉

Summa Cum Laude

Boston University

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适用用户类型

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领域能力

  • 39 计算机科学/工程
  • 27 金融学
  • 24 市场营销学
  • 12 传媒与新闻学
  • 11 医学
  • 11 会计、审计、金融管理
  • 11 工商管理
  • 11 商业分析
  • 10 人力资源管理
  • 10 教育学
  • 10 经济学
  • 9 电子工程
  • 9 金融工程
  • 9 统计科学
  • 7 战略管理学
  • 7 机械工程
  • 7 数据科学
  • 6 管理信息系统
  • 6 国际关系
  • 6 生物学
  • 5 艺术学

服务评价

4.96
服务质量68 人评价
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服务态度
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专业程度
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响应速度
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  • derek
    derek Nov 30, 2018
    计算机科学/工程 申请文书 深度修改

    Very responsible and helpful. I am quite satisfied with my SOP now.

    Thanks a lot Aaron!

  • Kitty Yang
    Kitty Yang Nov 26, 2018
    人力资源管理 简历 深度修改

    really professional and helpful!!!

  • Tianjing
    Tianjing Nov 22, 2018
    国际关系 申请文书 语言润色

    Great work.

  • pan
    pan Nov 9, 2018
    机械工程 申请文书 深度修改

    Thank you so much with my RL. It looks much better after the revise!

  • Ling
    Ling Oct 30, 2018
    商业分析 申请文书 深度修改

    Aaron's revising is really thorough and helps my essay much more effective! Thanks a lot!

  • 150****9545
    150****9545 Oct 25, 2018
    商业分析 申请文书 深度修改

    Very nice tutor! He's very kind and pertinent. Most importantly, he has extremely great ability to help me polish the PS!

  • Echo
    Echo Oct 24, 2018
    教育学 申请文书 语言润色

    Thank you

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