Very good. The expression is natural and there is no grammar mistakes. Henry also helps me improve the structure, which makes it meet the requirements better. I hope such a great PS can help me get admitted.
Thank you very much for your kind review! - very best of luck with your application!
Good but expensive!
Thanks. She made my letter looks more clear and concise.
Many thanks for dear Adam!!! And quite sorry for this late review. Adam is such a conscientious consultant. He not only corrected all the tiny mistakes in my document, but also gave me lots of great suggestions for the structure. I have almost changed my last two paragraphs totally according to his advice and feel quite satisfied with the new one. If I need any help in the future, I won't hesitate to turn to Adam again!! Thanks again, dear Adam!! Best wishes for you and your family~
Very helpful. Many Thanks.
The editor is experienced at refining the expression. She is very careful and efficient. She re-arranged most of the essay, but still keep the original tones, which is extremely satisfactory.
I now realize my first draft was quite off-the-point..Many thanks Angela for saving it back as much as you could!!
Thanks for being straightforward with my first draft:) That attitude really prompted me to reconsider the structure of my article and to understand what they want from the statement
Iracema really cared about my drafts and what message I'd like to convey through the words - I could feel that. And I appreciate your help with those long sentences and your helping organize my thoughts! Wish you all the best for the rest of this year:)
个例 - 如果第一稿有欠缺，他会比较直接的指出来，然后如果想要认真揣摩他的建议并且仔细修改的话还是要动一(hen)些(duo)脑子...但是如果能花时间思考而且两个人能互相get到对方思路，可以感觉到他确实比较用心，而且终稿确实有很大提高~
An experienced and to-the-point advisor. Pleasant to work seriously with. Glad that I found you - many thanks Henry!
Great work! Lloyd is really nice and willing to help.
Iracema is so professional that she made my statement more logical and smooth.
Thanks a lot!
Very efficient, has both understanding of Chinese and western culture. Everything was settled well by her. That's not just about language advantage, but also logic. Perfect！
Efficient: Only took less than 40 hours to complete the second editing.
Professional: Greatly improved the original essay in a decent way.