个例 - 如果第一稿有欠缺，他会比较直接的指出来，然后如果想要认真揣摩他的建议并且仔细修改的话还是要动一(hen)些(duo)脑子...但是如果能花时间思考而且两个人能互相get到对方思路，可以感觉到他确实比较用心，而且终稿确实有很大提高~
An experienced and to-the-point advisor. Pleasant to work seriously with. Glad that I found you - many thanks Henry!
Thank you very much for your kind review! - very best of luck with your application!
Iracema really cared about my drafts and what message I'd like to convey through the words - I could feel that. And I appreciate your help with those long sentences and your helping organize my thoughts! Wish you all the best for the rest of this year:)
Thanks for being straightforward with my first draft:) That attitude really prompted me to reconsider the structure of my article and to understand what they want from the statement
I now realize my first draft was quite off-the-point..Many thanks Angela for saving it back as much as you could!!